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I came up with these lyrics and I want to know what your guys think of it!

The song would be called- Dark Art


Chorus:

My soul paints a work of art

So dark it keeps me falling apart

A true story of my heart 

Once it’s over it brings me back to the star

 

Bridge:

Brushes of black across a blank canvas 

Won’t free your mind from all the madness

Potions of healing 

won’t free you from this feeling

So just keep painting like Picasso 

Till me heart learns how to follow

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12 minutes ago, thatgaga_source said:

I came up with these lyrics and I want to know what your guys think of it!

The song would be called- Dark Art


Chorus:

My soul paints a work of art

So dark it keeps me falling apart

A true story of my heart 

Once it’s over it brings me back to the star

 

Bridge:

Brushes of black across a blank canvas 

Won’t free your mind from all the madness

Potions of healing 

won’t free you from this feeling

So just keep painting like Picasso 

Till me heart learns how to follow

Oh My God! The bridge is EVERYTHING! I really like it a lot. Are you a singer, or you just like to write songs?

I think when love is pure you try to understand the reasons why…

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6 hours ago, thatgaga_source said:

I came up with these lyrics and I want to know what your guys think of it!

The song would be called- Dark Art


Chorus:

My soul paints a work of art

So dark it keeps me falling apart

A true story of my heart 

Once it’s over it brings me back to the star

 

Bridge:

Brushes of black across a blank canvas 

Won’t free your mind from all the madness

Potions of healing 

won’t free you from this feeling

So just keep painting like Picasso 

Till me heart learns how to follow

I’m actually only 15 and going through a really bad depression that nobody knows of and writing music is what really Saved me and keeps me going.

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I'm not an expert, but I LOVE it. It's the kind of lyrics that I like 😍 

Great job!! Keep going  I hope you're feeling good, keep writing about your feeling and emotions, let it all out!

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